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Post by jean on Oct 28, 2007 19:18:30 GMT -5
((Still like how you did this and this is my last character))
Sample post for X-23:
X-23 walked through the door that was in front of her. She was training and had got ticked off at Scott for saying that she wasn't doing good enough. So, she had reminded him that once upon a time she had taken him and the rest of the X-men down and she could take him down again. Uh! Why does he have to be so cruel to everyone that isn't him? X-23 asked herself this question as she walked out the doors to the wonderful lawn that was sitting still in front of the X Mansion. Man did I need some fresh air? X-23 sniffed in all the wonderful smells from the outside until she smelled something that she shouldn't have. She smelled Sabertooth. And he wasn't far away by the smell of it. X-23 saw Wolverine come out of the door and run past the teen while yelling "Get inside." So, once he was gone X-23 started to follow his sent.
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 28, 2007 19:20:52 GMT -5
Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury
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Post by erin on Oct 28, 2007 21:54:17 GMT -5
She hadn't meant for it to come this far. But there was no regret. She'd had to do it. Now her opponent could die a peaceful mutant death. A martyr for her kind.
The girl looked up at her with shocked wide eyes. She was cupping her abdomen, framing the silvery dagger lodged there. A splash of crimson decorated her torn raiment.
Mystique could impersonate anyone. But she never showed emotion when she watched someone die. It wasn't her style.
The girl gasped, "Momma?" Rogue toppled into the mud and Mystique looked on.
She hadn't mean for it to come this far.
Heard you needed a villain. This is the only one I know enough about and feel like I can pull off.
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Ororo Munroe
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There Is No Good and Evil, Only Power? Yeah Right!!!
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Post by Ororo Munroe on Oct 28, 2007 22:02:19 GMT -5
Sample Post For Storm: Ororo Munroe soared over the skyline of New York City. The goddess sported a black uniform, X's marking her superhero heritage. Storm heard a cry of help, and with a gasp and the sound of a gunshot echoing through the streets, she dove toward the busy roads below. Swooping into an alleyway to her left, the woman hovered twenty feet above the ground and watched a group of civilians huddling behind a dumpster, a gang in front of them. Sighing, the colored woman sent a trickle of electricity jumping from member to member, each of them jerking uncontrollably with the sudden burst of ambient energy. But before she could hear the thud of their bodies hitting the ground unconscious, a man crackling with black energy stepped from the shadows. Surprised, Ororo didn't take time to dodge an eerie beam that hit her in the chest, dropping her mind into a knocked out state.
Sample Post for Invisible Woman: Susan was hurtling through the streets of New York atop a force disk that buzzed with cosmic energy. Hearing a gunshot, which echoed a scream, the blond woman hurtled above traffic, dashing through alleyways and trying to come upon the place in which the sound had occurred. The sound of lightning popped into life and Sue reached the certain alley as a beam of darkness crackled into a hovering goddess who crumpled to the ground. Noticing the small throng of innocents cowering behind a dumpster, praying that the dark foe was not as powerful as it seemed, Sue dashed to the ground and held a force bubble around the citizens. With a single arm, Dark Matter, was the name, sent a column of energy to the invisible barrier. Oh, no, I'm done for, thought Susan, sending a Fantastic Flare into the sky as she attempted to block the intense energy coming toward her.
Sample Post for Nova: Nova had been blasting around the city when a fiery flare sent a four into existence above an alleyway about four blocks away. Forcing the heat around her to sky-rocket, Frankie rocketed into the alley where Sue was fighting a loosing battle to keep up a force field from dying under a person who absorbed his energy from shadow itself. But before being able to deplete the shadow sucking into his body, Nova was forced to dodge hundreds of purple spheres that were whizzing at her from the fist of her enemy. Finally sending a wring of flame to encircle Dark Matter, Nova took a hit and fell, still conscious. Susan was freed of her battle and ushered the citizens to the street hundreds of feet away, collapsing from exhaustion immediately after. Frankie was awake only long enough to see shadows from all around the alley suck into Dark Matter's body and he seemed to double in size.
Sample Post for Emma Frost: Emma was riding in her stretch limo when she felt a sharp fear coming from minds close by and one who had collapsed into unconsciousness. Halting her driver, who parked immediately, Emma Frost stood from her car, forcing all minds to not see her, making her virtually invisible. Striding to the nearest alley, where flashes of light were radiating from, Emma looked down the skinny side-street, to see three unconscious supers'. Smirking evilly, the rich woman already knew what had happened, the thoughts echoing through the astral plain from Dark Matter were enough to make an untrained psychic collapse. Using her mind, Emma forced a dumpster to hover into the air and hurtle to the dark enemy. As it melted under the wall of shadow that had appeared, Emma soared forward with her mind lifting the skinny form into more intense speed. As dark matter looked around quizzically for the unknown attacker, Emma stepped into view behind him, reaching around his neck and touched a single finger to his forehead, and he immediately collapsed into a small coma.
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 29, 2007 6:01:19 GMT -5
She hadn't meant for it to come this far. But there was no regret. She'd had to do it. Now her opponent could die a peaceful mutant death. A martyr for her kind. The girl looked up at her with shocked wide eyes. She was cupping her abdomen, framing the silvery dagger lodged there. A splash of crimson decorated her torn raiment. Mystique could impersonate anyone. But she never showed emotion when she watched someone die. It wasn't her style. The girl gasped, "Momma?" Rogue toppled into the mud and Mystique looked on. She hadn't mean for it to come this far. Heard you needed a villain. This is the only one I know enough about and feel like I can pull off. Good to have some villains. Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury Sample Post For Storm: Ororo Munroe soared over the skyline of New York City. The goddess sported a black uniform, X's marking her superhero heritage. Storm heard a cry of help, and with a gasp and the sound of a gunshot echoing through the streets, she dove toward the busy roads below. Swooping into an alleyway to her left, the woman hovered twenty feet above the ground and watched a group of civilians huddling behind a dumpster, a gang in front of them. Sighing, the colored woman sent a trickle of electricity jumping from member to member, each of them jerking uncontrollably with the sudden burst of ambient energy. But before she could hear the thud of their bodies hitting the ground unconscious, a man crackling with black energy stepped from the shadows. Surprised, Ororo didn't take time to dodge an eerie beam that hit her in the chest, dropping her mind into a knocked out state. Sample Post for Invisible Woman: Susan was hurtling through the streets of New York atop a force disk that buzzed with cosmic energy. Hearing a gunshot, which echoed a scream, the blond woman hurtled above traffic, dashing through alleyways and trying to come upon the place in which the sound had occurred. The sound of lightning popped into life and Sue reached the certain alley as a beam of darkness crackled into a hovering goddess who crumpled to the ground. Noticing the small throng of innocents cowering behind a dumpster, praying that the dark foe was not as powerful as it seemed, Sue dashed to the ground and held a force bubble around the citizens. With a single arm, Dark Matter, was the name, sent a column of energy to the invisible barrier. Oh, no, I'm done for, thought Susan, sending a Fantastic Flare into the sky as she attempted to block the intense energy coming toward her. Sample Post for Nova: Nova had been blasting around the city when a fiery flare sent a four into existence above an alleyway about four blocks away. Forcing the heat around her to sky-rocket, Frankie rocketed into the alley where Sue was fighting a loosing battle to keep up a force field from dying under a person who absorbed his energy from shadow itself. But before being able to deplete the shadow sucking into his body, Nova was forced to dodge hundreds of purple spheres that were whizzing at her from the fist of her enemy. Finally sending a wring of flame to encircle Dark Matter, Nova took a hit and fell, still conscious. Susan was freed of her battle and ushered the citizens to the street hundreds of feet away, collapsing from exhaustion immediately after. Frankie was awake only long enough to see shadows from all around the alley suck into Dark Matter's body and he seemed to double in size. Sample Post for Emma Frost: Emma was riding in her stretch limo when she felt a sharp fear coming from minds close by and one who had collapsed into unconsciousness. Halting her driver, who parked immediately, Emma Frost stood from her car, forcing all minds to not see her, making her virtually invisible. Striding to the nearest alley, where flashes of light were radiating from, Emma looked down the skinny side-street, to see three unconscious supers'. Smirking evilly, the rich woman already knew what had happened, the thoughts echoing through the astral plain from Dark Matter were enough to make an untrained psychic collapse. Using her mind, Emma forced a dumpster to hover into the air and hurtle to the dark enemy. As it melted under the wall of shadow that had appeared, Emma soared forward with her mind lifting the skinny form into more intense speed. As dark matter looked around quizzically for the unknown attacker, Emma stepped into view behind him, reaching around his neck and touched a single finger to his forehead, and he immediately collapsed into a small coma. All Approved ~ Colonel Nick fury
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 29, 2007 13:50:21 GMT -5
My audition for Carnage:
Carnage stood in the middle of the bar. The room was filled with dead bodies. Carnage was as happy as a five year old who just got a toy car, no a room full of toy cars. "Oh wasn't that just so much fun? I should definitely do that again." Then Carnage looked down at a dead body at his feet. He wrapped one of his tendrils around the dead body's head and pulled it up towards him breaking it off the neck. "Do you think I should do this again sometime, heady?" Carnage opened and closed the head's jaw with his hand and said in a fake voice, "Yes of course. It was such a great idea. Only next time, we should find a place with more peo..." Carnage stopped when he heard the ringing of a cell phone, "It seems we forgot somebody, didn't we, heady?"
Tina was scared as hell. She had just gone to the bathroom. Then when she came out she had saw this thing, this slimy, red, demonic looking thing rip a head of some poor man. Then she had saw the thing kill the three other remaining people. She was crawling behind a couch towards the door. She had to get out of here. Back to her husband, Joe and her new baby, Georgia. The thing started talking. At first Tina thought, it had saw her and was saying something but no. It was talking to itself. It was crazy. Then her cell phone started ringing.
Carnage walked over to the couch near the door, "Come out, come out wherever you are?" Carnage looked behind the couch, where the cell phone ringing had come from and saw a woman, looked like she was in her twenties, crouched against the wall, her arms wrapped around her legs.
"Please," she begged, "If you have any mercy, let me go? Please." "Why? Don't you want to play with me? Of course you do."
Carnage picked up the cell phone which was still ringing and answered it. "Hello," a voice on the cell phone said. "Oh hello who might you be." "I'm Joe. Where's Tina?" "Oh I'm sorry Joe. Tina can't come to the phone right now on account of her about to be killed. But you can try calling back soon. She might be available but I wouldn't count on it," Carnage said and then threw the phone to the ground.
Then all that was heard was the sound of Carnage laughing manically, Joe on the cell phone shouting and the screams of mercy from Tina until the screams had disappeared.
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Thor
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Post by Thor on Oct 29, 2007 17:37:38 GMT -5
My audition for Thor:
A flash of light, the roar of thunder, the shaking of the Earth. People scurrying around like insects trying to find out what was going on. Mass chaos and confusion, people trampling each other just to get a glimpse. A smoking crater and in it simply a hammer. His eyes opened in the void. He never expected to open his eyes again not after Raganarok. But he couldn't ignore the shaking or the calling of some unknown force.
"I have returned from the void. But why is this? Shouldn't have Raganarok ended Asgard along with her people. Then why am I standing here, me Thor god of thunder proud child of Asgard."
The roaring grew louder and Thor began doing the only thing he could do, walk forward. He couldn't shut out the calling, the pleading for him to call. The roaring and shaking that shouldn't exist within the void. But then why did he exist in the void.
"What strange enchantments are behind this. I must find out both out of my curiosity and out of concern. Who would be powerful enough to pull the god of thunder out of his eternal slumber and what is there goal?"
The calling grew louder as he continued to walk forward. Memories began to flash through his head. The Avengers, The Asgardians, his father Odin and his evil stepbrother Loki were all clear in his mind. It was then that he saw the hammer. It was like a relic from the past made of pure uru metal and protected with enchantments so that only those worthy could lift it. On the metal it read very plainly.
"Whoever shall hold this hammer shall be Thor."
Thor instantly knew why he had been called. There was still a need for the god of thunder. Still a need for might Mjilnor, and perhaps still a hope for scattered Asgard. He grabbed the hammer and felt its energies coarse through his body. He lifted it proudly as he was restored to his former godliness. Then with a voice that shook even the void he called out.
"I am Thor god of thunder! I retake Mjilnor and vow to return to the realm of existence and restore Asgard and protect those of Midgard!"
With that the void began to shimmer and sway and Thor could fill himself being pulled away to a familiar place and into a familiar body.
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 30, 2007 5:48:04 GMT -5
Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury
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Post by daheat on Oct 30, 2007 16:00:01 GMT -5
This is my audition for Hulk:
Dr. David Bruce Banner is a scientist. A scientist who is on the run and hiding. Trying to put back the pieces of a life that has been shattered, by rage, hatred and guilt. The only thing that's keeping him from going off the deep end is the love that he has for Betty Ross the daughter of the infamous General "Thunderbolt" Ross. The one man that is trying to capture the creature that dwells inside of Banner. Dripping wet with perspiration. Banner is being chased by the military, and is cornered in a section of the jungle that is blocked by thick brush on one side and a steep cliff on the other. Feeling frustrated,exhausted,and the anxiety of being captured. Combined with the stress, fatigue, and pain of running. He stumbles over thick brush and falls over the edge of the cliff. Grasping franticly at a limb sticking out from the cliff's edge. SNAP! the limb breaks and Banner awakes in a cold sweat breathing erratically. Trying to calm down from the nightmare, and keep from changing into the Hulk. He sits up taking deep breaths afraid of how close he came to morphing into the raging creature inside of him. With a sigh of relief. He turns to get up and is bitten by a snake. The pain,anger, and surprise of being bit triggers the metamorphosis. Eyes turn green. Muscles tense, flesh and bone expands. Skin turns green. Shirt tears,and rips from his body. The Hulk is unleashed .
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 30, 2007 16:01:53 GMT -5
Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury
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Post by Electro on Oct 30, 2007 21:21:59 GMT -5
Applying for Electro (Maxwell "Max" Dillon) <--- I was on your old site before two days later you and doom vanished
The day was September 12, Max was scouting a nearby bank seeing if anybody was lurking. Wearing a hooded overcoat he enters the bank 10 minutes before closing time. A small line up of people were waiting for the next free clerk. As he step foot into the bank, he rips off his coat, pulls down his mask and with a flash of lightning bolts destroys the glass windows behind him. "I am Electro, do not try anything, you are no match for me, I want all the money NOW, HAHAHA!". Two security guards were on duty that day, one of them hits the floor petrified, the other whips out his gun, aims it at Electro and says "FREEZE". Electro with a huge grin on his face, looks directly into the eyes of the guard and zap him with 1000 volt of electricity, electrocutes him, frying his body dead. He quickly comments "DOES ANY BODY ELSE WANT TO PLAY HERO TODAY, NOW GET ME MY MONEY". The second security guard seeing the turn of event whips out his gun and without saying a word he shoots. The scared and nervous guard barely misses Electro and shoots a hole in one of his lightning bolt decor of his mask. The guard closes his eyes and shoots the remainder of his gun. Five more shots go off BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG. People inside the bank are just flipping out in fear and panic. The guard opens his eyes slowly to notice that Electro had vanished. In the confusion Electro created a electromagnetic field surrounding him in case bullets would actually come his way. Electro had made his way towards one of the clerks counter, pressed his hands against the bulletproof glass and charged this body with as much electricity he could gather in that short amount of time. The glass could not resist the waves generated by that much electricity, finally gives in and shatters. He hops the counter, grabs the clerk by her hair (who was lying face down on the floor in fear) and pulls her up. When the guard finally realized where Electro was at, it was too late, now he had a hostage. The bank manager run toward Electro "Please let her go, here's all the money from the safe" giving him a bag. Electro grabs the manager by the throat and ask "Are you sure that's all", he replies "Yes Yes let me go, please, I beg you". Electro starts jolting the manager with some volts to make sure. "Stop, Stop there's more in the second compartment of the safe" said the manager. He continued, barely able to speak, "The only way to open the safe are two touch screens, and the only two that can do so are not here today, so please let me go". Electro drop the clerk, lifts the manager higher so his feet do not touch the floor and aims for the insides of the safe with the manager. Once inside the manager points towards the second door with two touch screens. Electro throws the manager against the wall, extends his arms on both sides of his body. An arc can be seen jolting a major bolt of lightning against both touch screens. A system overload opens the doors and Electro is just amazed with the amount of cash in front of him. Quickly he gathers as much as he can into a heavy duty bag, throws it over his shoulder like Santa Claus and makes his way to the exit. Back in the bank lobby most of the people have exited while Electro was no where to be seen, the rest where laying on the floor scared. Electro with a New York accents "Have a nice day!" as he walks towards the exit with a devilish smile.
With his first step out the door, he drops the bag of cash stunned. Spider-man, Daredevil and all of the Fantastic Four are waiting for him outside. In one clear instant Electro shouts out "IT'S FIGHTING TIME"... - to be continued.
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 31, 2007 7:01:26 GMT -5
Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury
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Post by Spider-Man on Oct 31, 2007 18:11:46 GMT -5
Audition for Peter parker(Spiderman)
The wind whipped at his face, cold and hard, unfriendly to his skin even with his Spidey suit on. Summer had just ended, which was a bit of a relief to the wall crawler, because that meant that the kids would be in school all day, and not chasing basketballs out on to the busy streets. Despite the many people in Manhattan, and the wave of crimes that never seemed to end, things had been really quite quiet for the web slinger, allowing him to rest whereas usually he'd go from one crime scene to the next, busting criminals left right and center. That didn't faze Peter though, he welcomed the unexpected slip of law breaking with open arms, relishing in the time he got to sit and take a breather. Being a superhero had its advantages and disadvantages, after all, and even though this was not one he had foreseen, he welcomed it most joyously.
Reaching out with his right hand he sprung his web from his wrist, letting it latch on to the building before letting go of the web in his left hand, putting his weight on the new one instead. This propelled him forwards and downwards, then back upwards at a furious rate. letting go of the web he let himself fly upwards now, landing softly on the top of The Daily Bugle's rooftop. "Well, time to hand these pictures into Mr.Jameson." he said to himself aloud, sighing a bit at the thought of standing in Mr.Jameson's office again, only to be criticized for his picture-taking, then offered an amount of money for them. It got tiring mostly, to hear the man of a thousand words (as Peter liked to call him) insult and lie about Peter, even though he wasn't aware that he was doing it.
"Oh well, you'll just have to suck it up Pete, it's just another day in your double-life you lead. Anyways, the extra cash couldn't hurt." he said, giving himself a pep talk as he made his way to the large door that opened up to the rooftop he was now standing on. Before he could lift his hand to the doorknob though, his super-senses heard a gunshot go off, and then the unmistakable sound of sirens wailing as the police pulled into pursuit of whoever had shot the gun off. Instinctively he pulled his jacket, pants, and shirt off (he had been wearing regular clothes when he had swung here, risky he knew, but he had been in a hurry) to reveal his blue and red costume.
Pulling on his mask he ran to the edge of the building and stood there for a second, listening to the sound of the sirens to direct him where to go. Right, they were going right, he thought wearily as he made ready to jump. Taking flight he dived, throwing his arms out in front of him, presumably to fall into an oblivion if not for his powers.
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Post by Colonel Nick Fury on Oct 31, 2007 18:14:24 GMT -5
Hope you can pull of Spidey. He's one of the mahor characters. Approved ~ Colonel Nick Fury
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Post by jean on Oct 31, 2007 19:55:11 GMT -5
((OK I lied. This is my last character. But, I still like how you did this.))
Sample post for Lorna Dane:
Lorna walked out of her door and slipped into her car. She put her seat belt on. Taking off her jacket and revealed the green costume that covered her skin. Letting her phone slip out of her pocket she open it. Pressing her finger's against the buttons on the phone she called her friend, Jean Grey, and pressed the phone against her ear. Polaris heard a few rings in her ear and her friend's voice come through to her. "Jean, I need you to come to the alley beside the bank" she said into the phone that she held in her hand. "OK" Polaris heard in the phone. "Thanks" she answered. Polaris opened her car door and ran into the alley by the bank. Once there, Lorna, left the ground and slid into the air and flew to the top of the building so that she could wait for her friend.
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